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Title: One Second More
Summary: Spoilers for Season 2. Missing scene for Simon Said, POV Dean on the hill. Drabbleish. Probably half a hundred versions of this on the 'net by now, heh.
Characters: Dean
Classification: missing scene, Simon Said, ficlet
Rating: T!!!
Warnings: Spoilers for Season 2. Freaking dark. Suicide thoughts.
Word Count: 178 words
Disclaimer: They aren't mine.

One Second More
by CaffieneKitty
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"I see you." Looking through the scope, Dean saw Webber's lips move on the road below and heard Webber's voice in his head. /You know you'll only fail him. You know he's ours. Put that gun under your chin and pull the trigger./ "Bye bye."

Of course I'll fail Sam. Dad wouldn't have, but dad died to bring me back. Dad laid what he'd been hiding from us on me, and then died. He told me that and expects me to handle it, when he's known since I was ten that I'm a screw up? Dean turned the rifle around, put the barrel under his chin. Webber's right. I should be dead anyway, so what difference will this make. His finger tightened on the trigger.

The shot echoed across the dam. Dean watched Webber fall, felt Webber's compulsion drop away. Let his chin rest on the barrel of the gun one second more. Closed his eyes tightly, eyebrows bunching. One second more.

With a noise of disgust he threw the rifle aside, into the underbrush, and scrambled down the hill to Sam.

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Tags: 2.05, ficlet, missing/alternate scene, supernatural
Current Mood: Eep!
Current Music: "Carry On My Wayward Son" by Kansas

	From: mitchsgirl	Date: October 27th, 2006 09:14 pm (UTC)		(Link)

Ouch. This made my stomach hurt. 'Cause I could actually see it happening--just for that one second. Poor pretty broken boy (with the kickass singing voice).

	From: caffienekitty	Date: October 28th, 2006 04:49 am (UTC)		(Link)

Thanks. I don't normally do dark and angsty, so feedback is great!

Also, yeah I totally have to go back and re-watch the singing part another several times because I haven't been able to watch it without collapsing in helpless laughter. His voice is awesome. That scene is almost as good as drunken Kareoke.

	From: i_sudoku	Date: November 28th, 2006 08:25 am (UTC)		(Link)
	I guess that would be what Dean thought during Simon said

Well done, as I said for "Transitions" in fanfiction.net, you are also good in doing angst.

Got your review reply. Well, poor Australians need to wait for Doctor Who as well. Does the three way global culture exchange include Australia, Canada, and America (or UK)? Or do you group Canada and America together? :)
I wish I have the mind control power like in "Simon Said" and influence someone to make a great Australian sci-fi/horror/fantasy. That would be using the power for good :) I do not want anyone die to get the power though.

	From: caffienekitty	Date: November 29th, 2006 04:24 am (UTC)		(Link)
	Re: I guess that would be what Dean thought during Simon said

Well, poor Australians need to wait for Doctor Who as well. Does the three way global culture exchange include Australia, Canada, and America (or UK)? Or do you group Canada and America together? :)

Canada kind of gets most US programming with hardly any difficulty, so I was kind of counting Canada/US as one arm, since half their sci-fi shows are filmed in Canada anyway. Although the CBC apparently has some kind of co-operation deal with the BBC on Season three of the new Doctor Who and on Torchwood, so there's a kind of Canada/UK arm there as well. Australia needs to join in somehow, and there's a kind of odd three-way of four participants.

Really though, simultaneous global release of good TV shows would be great.

I wish I have the mind control power like in "Simon Said" and influence someone to make a great Australian sci-fi/horror/fantasy. That would be using the power for good :) I do not want anyone die to get the power though.

Yeah, that dying thing is always a drawback. :-D

	From: i_sudoku	Date: November 29th, 2006 05:03 am (UTC)		(Link)
	Re: I guess that would be what Dean thought during Simon said

I see (about the three-way for four).

Let me see if I can lobby the TV programmers to produce good Australian shows. :-D

Well, I think they try to do the global release of "Jericho", although I think it is not very popular.

	From: nativestar	Date: September 4th, 2007 03:11 pm (UTC)		(Link)

Short, powerful and painful, especially as it is completely believable that it happened. Just for a second. Where Dean's head was at towards the begining of season two was scary. Thanks for sharing this.

I'm doing a Simon Said fic rec on

spn_epific and I'd like to include this there.

	From: caffienekitty	Date: September 4th, 2007 03:38 pm (UTC)		(Link)

Sure, that'd be awesome! Yeah the first part of season two was a real stomper emotionally for Dean.

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