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Two Three FOUR comment-fic entries from clex_monkie89's 5.08-related comment-fic meme

Titles: 'Startup Sound', [withheld due to possible spoiler], [no title] and [withheld due to possible spoiler]
Warnings/Rating: SPOILERS to 5.08, Spoilers for Harper's Island, GEN, PG [LJ-only]
Word Count: 400 and 750-ish and maybe 300 and about 200
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Don't sue me.
Summary: 5.08-related Crack.

(Posted here at the Meme - Prompt: Sam and Dean are trapped in a Mac vs PC commercial)

A/N: Computer technical assertions made in this may bear no relation to actual Mac or PC capabilities or deficiencies.

Startup Sound

The room was white. Freaking solid, ongoing, forever, white. The only thing besides Dean in the room was Sam. He stood beside Dean, wearing something sort of normal, if somewhat geekier.

Dean looked down at himself. Suit. And a little pudgy.

"What the hell show is this Sam?"

Sam grimaced. "It's not a show, it's another ad."

Dean turned around, looking at the endless white room. "An ad for what? White paint?"

"Let's get this over with." Sam cleared his throat. "Hi. I'm... I'm a Mac."

Dean lowered his chin and stared at Sam. "No way."

"Come on Dean. It's gotta be better than that herpes thing."

Dean sighed. "And I'm a PC."

"What's wrong PC?"

"Damned if I know." Dean crossed his arms.

Sam glared.

Dean rolled his eyes. "Why I'm just fine, Mac!" He said with great cheer. "Everything's just fine! I'm the best operating system in the world! Why would anything beeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-"

Dean's face went blank and he fell over backwards with a puff of smoke.

When he blinked his eyes open again to a loud digitized Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa... sound, he saw Sam hovering over him.

"Are you all right, De- uh, PC?"

Dean got to his feet. "I'm fine, I juuuuuuuuu-" And over he went again with a thud.

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa... Sam was kneeling beside Dean this time.

"Dude, play your damn role or we're never getting out of here!"

"I am, Dean. Mac is a nice guy who cares and stuff." Sam held out a hand.

Dean swatted it away. Sam looked hurt.

"Mac is a nice guy. PC is a douche. These are Mac commercials, Sam." Dean got to his feet again and pasted on his biggest, fakest smile. "I'm just fine, this is a perfectly nooooooo-" *thud*

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa...

"All part of the stabilization processssssssss-" *thud*

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa...

"Son of a biiiiiiiiii-" *thud*

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa...

"Play the role, Dean!"

"Shove it, Saaaaaaaa-" *thud*

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa...

"Okay, fine!" Dean said, clambering to his feet and dusting his suit off. "So I need to reboot a lot! It's not my fault! I'm an advanced computer system and I shouldn't have to work with out-dated drivers!"

"So every company that makes computer peripherals needs to update all their drivers just because you don't want to work with old things?"

"Well of course, they always do when there's a new system. And don't tell me Mac users don't need to get new drivers when you upgrade."

"Actually, they don't. I find them for them."

"Well, I'm too advanced to go looking foooooooooooo-" *thud*

Doodle-te-doo! Waaaaaa...

When Dean opened his eyes next, the room wasn't white.


Reference for the unafflicted: Vista Startup Sound

- - -

(Posted here at the Meme - Prompt: Sam and Dean are trapped in Fullmetal Alchemist)

A/N: Apologies for canon errors in Fullmetal Alchemist. Dean's opinions are not mine.

Fullmetal Winchesters

Blue sky. Puffy white clouds. Bright green rolling hills. Brown roads. Most of the TV shows the Trickster had sent them into were bright, but this was beyond bright. This was... animated.

"Crap." Dean looked at himself, past the big stupid pointy blond bangs that obscured his peripheral vision. White gloves, red robes, and he didn't want to look but he was pretty sure his arm and leg were made of metal. His hair pulled at his scalp at the back and even more than not wanting to know if his limbs were made of metal, Dean did not want to know if his hair was in a pony-tail. Or something worse.

"Sam? Do you have any idea what show this is?" said Dean. Then looked behind him. No Sam. Now what? "SAM?" Dean shouted.

A loud metallic clonging approached, vibrating the ground. Dean spun around to see an eight foot tall guy in armor and something like a loincloth stomping over a hill towards him.

Fighting the sudden bizarre urge to clap his hands together, Dean took a step backwards and wished he had a gun, something with armor-piercing rounds.

"Dean! It's me!" the armored guy shouted hollowly in Sam's voice while waving an arm over his helmeted head.

"Sam, what the hell?" Dean tucked his bangs behind his ears and walked up to meet Sam on the road, ignoring the weird feeling/non-feelings he was getting from his leg and arm and instead frowning at the oddly hollow sound of Sam's footsteps.

"I dunno Dean. It looks kind of like Anime."

"Yeah, I got that the place is animated."

"No, Anime. Japanese animation." Sam gestured towards Dean. "I mean the big eyes and things. There was a club at the dorm in first year. This looks like one of the things they had on."

Dean looked at his reflection in the chestplate of Sam's armor. Big eyes, stupid pointy emo hair and- oh god. A braid. He looked up, and up some more at Sam. "Okay, so the Trickster likes Japanese things. Maybe this one won't hit either of us in the junk."

Sam's enormous metal feet shifted. "I don't think I have to worry about that."

Dean snorted. "Well, yeah. You get a full suit of armor, I get stupid hair and a bathrobe."

"Yeah. Armor. I get armor." Sam coughed hollowly.

"You could at least take off the freaking helmet."

"Noooo, I couldn't."

"Why?" Japanese animation. Dean grinned. "Sammy... are you a giant robot?"

"Not exactly, but..." he sighed. "Fine." Sam reached up and took the helmet off. And had no head.

"What the- Sammy!?" Dean jumped up, grabbing the open neck of the armor, pulling himself up. He peered down into the armor expecting to see Sam further down in, like a sports mascot where the person's head only came up to the mascot suit's chest. The suit of armor was totally empty except for a symbol on the inside that he didn't recognize but knew he shouldn't touch.

"I'm the armor, Dean." Sam's voice echoed around inside the hollow armor. "This is me."

All thoughts of his own metal arm and leg disappeared. Dean swallowed a sick feeling. "Sam... are you a ghost?"

"Something like that, I think."

"Are you okay?"

"I feel fine, just..." The armor shrugged slightly. "Non-biological."

Dean gritted his teeth. I'm gonna kill the frigging Trickster twice for this. A hundred times. He dropped to the ground and took a step back to look up at Sam. "We have to get out of here. You need to get back to normal."

"To do that we have to figure out what 'playing our role' means here. I didn't really watch much of it at the dorms, but they took over the TV room on Tuesday nights so I saw some." Sam's helmet turned, looking at the surrounding area. "It seems familiar though."

Dean watched the helmet swiveling around under Sam's arm. "Uh. Could you put your head on if you're going to look around. That's really disturbing."

"Sorry," said Sam, putting the helmet back on. "Look at the bright side, at least I don't have stupid hair."

Dean smirked. "Hate to break it to you, but you always have stupid hair, Sammy. Not always quite that freakishly tall, though."

Sam's helmet tilted to the side. "I didn't want to say anything, Dean, but you are kind of... short."

Suddenly Dean found himself running around in a circle, flailing his fists in the air and babbling high-speed about insignificant small things and feeling like his head might literally explode.

"I'm sorry! I didn't mean it like that!" shouted Sam over Dean's rapid-fire babble.

Dean stopped in front of Sam, panting. "What the hell was that!?"

Sam nodded. "Oh yeah. I remember this one now."

"Okay, so what do we do?"

"I think you just did it."

And just like that, they were somewhere else.


- - -

(Posted here at the Meme - Prompt: Sam and Dean are trapped on Harper's Island)

(No Title)

"Okay, so, Bobby's the Sheriff, Ron's not dead and is trying to start a beer company-" Dean raised his open bottle of not-that-bad-actually micro-brew beer, "-with money he's gonna steal off a dead guy but maybe hasn't yet, Ruby's marrying the only guy here who's more of a dork than you, Daniel Elkins is the priest who's going to marry them, and is also not dead, except no one knows where he is right now so maybe he is dead, and the creepy little girl is probably not evil, but we don't know for sure because you didn't watch the whole show, just random bits."

Sam nodded. "Right."

"And there's either a psycho or a spirit or something going around randomly whacking people?"


"And everyone's sticking around here why?"

"Because they haven't noticed yet. Or it hasn't started yet." Sam shrugged. "I don't know."

"Great. So what you're saying is almost all of these people are going to die bloody and we can't do anything to help any of them."

"Not if we're playing the roles the Trickster assigned us."

Dean clenched his jaw and looked around the room full of people.

"They aren't real people, Dean. The Trickster made them up."

"If either of us turns out to be the murderer, Sam, I'm not doing it." Dean glared into his beer bottle. "I don't care if they're fake people. I'm not murdering anyone for that sick, twisted bastard."

"Odds are neither of us is the murderer, Dean. Odds are we're just victims."

"Yeah, well, I'm not gonna play that role too happily either." Dean drained the dregs of his beer.

Sam huffed. "Maybe we can play whatever our roles are and get out of here before either situation comes up."

"Fine. Whatever. So who are we?"

"No idea."

"Really," Dean said flatly, turning to Sam.

"I don't know who half of these people are, Dean. I looked it up on Wikipedia after the show finished and I still couldn't tell who was who. There was a grid and everything."

"Great. That's just great. How are we supposed to play our freaking roles if we don't know who we are, Sam?"

"I'm trying to take notes, alright? Just keep drinking and stay close to the group; maybe someone'll call us by name."

Dean looked sideways at Sam. "And you'll be able to figure out what we're supposed to do from that?"

"Well... no," admitted Sam.

"So just keep drinking?"

"Keep drinking."

Dean cracked the lid off another bottle of micro-brew. "Sounds like a plan to me."


- - -

(Posted here at the Meme - Prompt: Sam and Dean are trapped on 'The Smurfs')

A/N: lurkingwombat will kill me for this...

Just Smurfy.

"Dean," Said Sam, pushing up the thick glasses with one disturbingly blue finger. "You really shouldn't eat those."

"Why the smurf not?" Dean stuffed another wedge of smurfberry pie into his mouth. "I'm Greedy Smurf. I'm playing my smurfing role here."

"The sheer volume of pie you've eaten is about ten times your current total mass." Sam pointed at the teetering pile of empty pie plates. "You're going to explode."

"See? You sound exactly like you should for your role there, Brainy Smurf." Dean leaned back against a mushroom and belched. "Drop a few 'smurf'-bombs into your dialog and we'll be out of here in no time."

Sam glared. "You still shouldn't eat that much. It's physically impossible."

"We're cartoons, Sam. Physically impossible is what cartoons are made for. Besides, have you tried smurfberry pie? It's like smurfing crack."

Sam sighed and sat down next to Dean. "Smurf it."

"There you go! How hard was that?" Dean slapped Sam on the back, leaving a slight smurfberry-colored smear.

"Brainy Smurf! Brainy Smurf!" called a voice even higher pitched than the average Smurf.

"And helloooo Smurfette!" Dean stood up, grinning.

Sam sighed again and stood. "What can I d- smurf for you, Smurfette?"

The blonde-haired blue girl-smurf wrung her hands. "Oh Brainy Smurf! I can't find Papa Smurf anywhere! I smurfed you'd know what to smurf!"

"What to, uh, smurf about what?"

"Azreal is coming!"

Dean stepped forward, raising his smurfberry-stained hands and frowning. "Hold the smurf on. Azazel? We smurfed that smurfing yellow-eyed smurf-smurfer! How the smurf is he still smurfing around!?"

Smurfette looked scandalized.

Sam rolled his eyes. "Not Azazel, Dean, Azreal. Gargamel's cat."

"Oh. Wait, a cat? What's so bad about-"

A feline snarl carried through the forest. Between the bushes a mangy twitching tail that looked about as tall as a four-storey building approached.

"Oh, smurf."


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22 comments or Leave a comment
samalander_dawn From: samalander_dawn Date: November 9th, 2009 07:06 am (UTC) (Link)
LOL! holy crow I love the way you write :D
funny funny funny funny and damn I'd love to see them filmed :D
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 9th, 2009 07:10 am (UTC) (Link)

I added another one while you were commenting.
samalander_dawn From: samalander_dawn Date: November 12th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC) (Link)
dang! you added two! *reads*

and dang! I _wanted_ that tea I just sprayed against the screen.... :D

loop back to my initial comment because I still love and adore the way you write and I'd sooooo love to see these filmed.... :D

god you rock :D
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 12th, 2009 03:22 am (UTC) (Link)
*hands you a towel and a fresh cup of tea*
samalander_dawn From: samalander_dawn Date: November 12th, 2009 02:56 am (UTC) (Link)
oh! and my Mum could never tell the Harper's Island people apart either :) I get they were trying to make it a little ambiguous so we couldn't pick that thing out, but a wee bit too much....
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 12th, 2009 03:26 am (UTC) (Link)
So many characters! They didn't tell the guy who was playing the murderer he was it until close to the end and they didn't tell anyone when they were going to die until the episode was being filmed, so everyone was trying to be a little bit evil just in case, I think. Too many characters to follow in detail.
anniehow From: anniehow Date: November 9th, 2009 11:14 am (UTC) (Link)
I think the smurf one reaches such heights of brilliant crack that it is practically a shiny star in the night sky :-D
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 9th, 2009 05:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hehe, thanks! :-)
aescu From: aescu Date: November 9th, 2009 07:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
You know, you've just made me want to watch a mac-ad *facepalm*
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 10th, 2009 03:55 am (UTC) (Link)
I think they're cute, but I'm a Mac-centric multi-platform user, so opinions may vary.
aescu From: aescu Date: November 10th, 2009 07:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
In Austria we don't get Mac Ads. Just Microsoft. But that's what youtube is for :)
ciaranbochna From: ciaranbochna Date: November 9th, 2009 09:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
OMG you did a Full Metal Alchemist Fic!!!!! If you could see my face, sorry. And um, I giggled like a idiot for the smurf one:P I always did feel bad for Azrael though, sue me. So I coughed and laughed my way through those--love it, thank you I needed that:)
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 10th, 2009 04:03 am (UTC) (Link)
I had no idea you liked Fullmetal Alchemist!!! I taped most of them off YTV, and writing this really made me want to re-watch them. They're all scrambled and out of order and mixed in with InuYasha and Invader Zim though. And Danny Phantom and Teen Titans. And some other stuff.

And um, I giggled like a idiot for the smurf one:P I always did feel bad for Azrael though, sue me.

Me too, although he was never portrayed as a sympathetic character. MadCat from Inspector Gadget had more of a 'he's there because Dr. Claw won't let him go' feel and I always kind of thought he was secretly spying on M.A.D. for Penny and Brain. *nods like she's sane*
ciaranbochna From: ciaranbochna Date: November 10th, 2009 08:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh yes, I used to watch FMA with Jason and Krista among mannny other anime, but it was one of my favs along with Bleach. The dynamic between the two brothers was brilliant, like some other show I know of;) Good theory on MadCat, he was certainly more sympathetic--and must have had some sort of damage from being squished all the time:P
irismay42 From: irismay42 Date: November 9th, 2009 10:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
I find it quite disturbing that the one I can imagine the most is Dean as a Smurf...
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 10th, 2009 04:04 am (UTC) (Link)
It's the pie. *nods*
malevolent73 From: malevolent73 Date: November 10th, 2009 07:30 am (UTC) (Link)
I probably shouldn't jinx myself but I run a PC with Vista and it doesn't really give me any trouble to speak of. *knocks on wood* But the ads are still funny. :)

Harper's Island had me LOL'ing. That was AWESOMELY funny.

And Smurfs! That was definitely one of my staple cartoons. I can hear their voices still if I think about it. La la la la la la...
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 10th, 2009 07:53 am (UTC) (Link)
I probably shouldn't jinx myself but I run a PC with Vista and it doesn't really give me any trouble to speak of. *knocks on wood* But the ads are still funny. :)

Some people it won't, it depends on what you're running it on and what you're trying to do with it. We had one Vista system we tried to network in the office (we have every flavour of Windows back to '95 running). Vista had a massive meltdown, fudged up the server and fried parts of the network for the nearly two days. We don't do Vista. XD

Then again, most IT people looking at our network would run away screaming too. :-)
tigriswolf From: tigriswolf Date: November 11th, 2009 08:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, man! So awesome. I think the Harper's Island one is my fav.
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 12th, 2009 08:00 am (UTC) (Link)
Hee! Thanks!
lurkingwombat From: lurkingwombat Date: November 12th, 2009 06:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Holy Smurfing Crap!!! I am going to SMURFING smurf you out!!!!!
That was great. i smurfed it out loud here so that Smurfette-J (who hadn't heard/read it) and Smurfette-S (who had) could hear it for them-smurfs.
Also, the smurf-tastic Mac vs. Pc was also smurfing funny.
When you smurf, you really know how to smurf the smurfing smurf right!!!
Smurf you later
Lurking Wom-Smurf
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: November 12th, 2009 08:06 am (UTC) (Link)
Holy Smurfing Crap!!! I am going to SMURFING smurf you out!!!!!

...I am vaguely smurfed by this statement... o.O

That was great.

Glad you guys liked it!
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