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Cabin Pressure Fanfic: On Rusted Steed He Rode - CaffieneKittySpace
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Cabin Pressure Fanfic: On Rusted Steed He Rode
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aelfgyfu_mead From: aelfgyfu_mead Date: September 2nd, 2012 11:51 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, well done! Honestly, I think in Brenda's situation I'd rather have someone well-meaning fumbling about a bit than someone too slick and self-assured—so it's good he didn't get Douglas in too soon and that Douglas didn't stay too long. Of course, the travel alarm will probably help with the feeling of safety as much as (or more than) the thought of Martin defending her, but it was good of him to offer—and he can surprise people. It was also good of him to call the landlord. It needed to be done. I found Brenda very believable, and the voices of Martin and Douglas right.

Martin deserves a hug, even if it was a rather wet, soppy one.
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: September 3rd, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! Martin does need more hugs.
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