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Sherlock Graphic Fanfic: How We Rescued My Daddy From His Bad Friends (JWP #22) - CaffieneKittySpace
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Sherlock Graphic Fanfic: How We Rescued My Daddy From His Bad Friends (JWP #22)
Title: How We Rescued My Daddy From His Bad Friends
Fandom: Sherlock (BBC)
Alternate Postings: AO3
Rating/Content: PG13, OC child POV, Other incidental ocs, outsider POV, images, abduction of an adult, silly, possibly nauseating
Warnings: child in danger, briefly
Word Count: 800
Disclaimer: Not my world.
Notes: Written for watsons_woes July Writing Prompt #22: Shine Yer Shoes Guvnor?. A child's perspective. I presume if any actual case involving a child witness was conducted like this, there'd be some kind of board of inquiry into exactly why certain things happened the way they did, but this isn't the real world. I've tried putting the text version of the child's story (without teacher commentary) as alt text, don't know if it worked.

Summary: This is Mr Sherlock. He's not a nice man but he's a good man because he found my daddy. He wasn't wearing his hat but I drawd it in anyway.


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How We Rescued My Daddy From His Bad Friends
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This is Mr Sherlock.  He's not a nice man but he's a good man because he found my daddy. He wasn't wearing his hat but I drawd it in anyway. This is Doctor Watson. He's a nice man and he's a good man and he helped find my daddy. He crosses his arms and frowns a lot, especially when Mr Sherlock says things, but he's really nice.This is Nspektr Lestrade. He's a policeman, and he's nice and good and funny and is really good at making silly faces that helped me not be scared too much when we were in the police car outside the primiter where we had to wait for my daddy to get rescued.
My daddy had friends that were bad and not really his friends at all. They always wanted money from my daddy or they'd get him in trouble at work. Sometimes daddy told them things he wasn't sposed to say about where he worked and they didn't take money.Daddy's bad friends got mad at him and took him away. I was hiding because daddy always said to hide when his bad friends came. But I always peeked! When they took daddy, he was yelling 'no' and they took him anyway and that's bad. I was scared!
When they drove away I got out of the cupboard and called 999 right away.Some policemen came with a nice lady who was my avocado from the child services. She was there to make sure I didn't get too scared and had water and snacks if I wanted them. I got a whole Curly Wurly!
We went to the police station, and Mr Sherlock and Doctor Watson and Nspektr Lestrade were there and already mad at the bad people that took away my daddy. I told them about the bad men who came to see my daddy for money, and that I hid and watched when they came over. Mr Sherlock said to tell him everything and not leave out the sliteist D tail. I told him everything I could think of, even things that are rude to say about people even when they're true. I can't say any of it here because it's all evidens for the court now so it has to be secret or the jury might get hung!But I was telling Mr Sherlock about my daddy's bad friends and he jumped up and shouted and ran out of the room. I wasn't scared, but my avocado lady was very cross. Doctor Watson told me it was okay, it meant that Mr Sherlock had an idea and was going to go do something about it, and it was because of what I said, so it was good! I helped them find Daddy!I waited at the station and the avocado lady helped me find a place to have a nap but then Nspektr Lestrade came and said they'd found my daddy and were getting him away from his bad friends, and that maybe I could go when it was safe so I could see my daddy and see he was ok.
That's when we were sitting in the police car outside the primiter and Nspektr Lestrade was making silly faces so I wouldn't be scared or worry about my daddy. There were policemen putting all of daddy's bad friends into a police van, but even though they got them all we had to stay away to be safe. I thought we should go get daddy right away, but my avocado lady said we should stay back so the police could finish catching all the bad guys.
But then I got to see my daddy again! Doctor Watson and Mr Sherlock came with him and some police to the police car and I jumped out and ran and hugged him and Doctor Watson and Mr Sherlock too, but I don't think Mr Sherlock likes hugs. My daddy had some ouches and plasters but he was ok and he was happy to see me. He's going to tell on all his bad friends, which you shouldn't do, but Doctor Watson said because these are all bad men who were mean to my daddy and not really his friends at all, so it's ok that he told the police on them.Daddy had to go talk to the police, so I got to spend the night at my avocado lady's house. She has kittens!!Me and Daddy went home in the morning, and Daddy lost his job but he says it's good and he wants to do better now, and it's always good to try to do better!

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(that's it)

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cleflink From: cleflink Date: July 26th, 2016 01:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
The Avocado lady cracked me up. :) What a fun look at the guys in action from a child's perspective!
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: July 27th, 2016 05:39 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you! :-D
debriswoman From: debriswoman Date: July 26th, 2016 05:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Highly inventive, particularly the spelling:-)
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: July 27th, 2016 05:41 am (UTC) (Link)
Glad it was effective!
capt_facepalm From: capt_facepalm Date: July 27th, 2016 12:09 am (UTC) (Link)
What a treat! You put a lot of effort into this. Picasso would have been jealous. He said he spent his life trying to draw like a child (or something to that effect). I loved the POV and how you rendered this story.
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: July 27th, 2016 05:42 am (UTC) (Link)
HA! Yeah, no, I'm no Picasso! XD
drinkingcocoa From: drinkingcocoa Date: July 27th, 2016 03:22 am (UTC) (Link)
Love love love love love this. Every bit of it.
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: July 27th, 2016 05:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Very glad you did!
donutsweeper From: donutsweeper Date: July 27th, 2016 01:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
Aww, this is darling.
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: August 2nd, 2016 01:00 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you!
adabsolutely From: adabsolutely Date: July 28th, 2016 12:56 am (UTC) (Link)
Lovely!
caffienekitty From: caffienekitty Date: August 2nd, 2016 01:00 am (UTC) (Link)
Glad you liked it!
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